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tomorrow we'll set
paper airplanes adrift
over the muddy pacific,
the place where it starts
behind stanley park.

i know the ocean wasn't
really born there, i know it
comes from a bigger womb,
but it feels that way to me,
sometimes.  

that edge there
where water and foam
smash hopelessly against sand,
that feels like creation.
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Given 2011-12-25
As we draw the year to a close, it is good to remember were all things are born. borne by *lestatsgirl387 ( Featured by `Halatia )
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~trynke Feb 11, 2012  Student General Artist
I like it :)
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*pagan-poetess Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks very much :)
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*KaitForest Feb 2, 2012   Writer
that edge there
where water and foam
smash hopelessly against sand,
that feels like creation.



ahhhh yesss
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*pagan-poetess Feb 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) thank you so much for the favourites!! i'm glad you enjoyed the pieces :) :heart:
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~Phu-Phu-Hugs-Me Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
i know the ocean wasn't
really born there, i know it
comes from a bigger womb

Such lovely words. :heart:

What a particularly nice time of year to receive a daily deviation. Congratulations!
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*pagan-poetess Dec 27, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
it really is a lovely time of year for it!! :) means a lot to me!! thank you so much :) i'm very glad you enjoyed the poem :blushes:
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~TheHornist Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the DD!! Beautiful Poetry, you're a very gifted writer :D
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*pagan-poetess Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:blushes: thank you so so much!! that is very kind of you to say :) writing is one of my most favourite things in the entire world, and it's something that's extremely important to me :) thanks so much for your sweet words :)
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*i-am-a-bridgewalker Dec 25, 2011  Student Writer
there is enough rich detail here to make the snatches of mystery gripping and intriguing.

there is a gentle respect for innocence here even as the piece celebrates growth.

very nice work.
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*pagan-poetess Dec 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
oh, goodness, thank you so much!! i'm very glad that you like it :) your support means a lot to me :) :) :)
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