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i fell asleep
and then woke up again
and was apple-cheeked
with the dreams i had.
the pillow made creases
in my face and i
imagined them to be paths
on a treasure map. in the
spaces behind my eyeballs,
there might be old chests
bursting with treasure. there
might be.
and then woke up again
and was apple-cheeked
with the dreams i had.
the pillow made creases
in my face and i
imagined them to be paths
on a treasure map. in the
spaces behind my eyeballs,
there might be old chests
bursting with treasure. there
might be.
june 4, 2011
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since i'm a fan and always will be i can wield honesty more honestly now....lol!...i.e...i wasn't taken with the flow, but each line on its own is rich with image and i'm only writing a comment cause of the whole 'spaces behind my eyeballs, there might be old chests bursting with treasure' thing....which is like half the piece!!...and that half and 'there might be', the over the half part, pretty much cricks my neck in a 246 way....
...you hover above and that's all i'll say at this time...
...you hover above and that's all i'll say at this time...